Hedging is not automatic caution
A hedge marks a boundary in knowledge: probability, frequency, scope, measurement, design, or explanation. May indicates possibility. Tends to indicates a pattern that is not universal. In this sample limits population. Consistent with identifies compatibility without proving a mechanism. Each phrase makes a different commitment.
Start by stating the strongest claim the evidence supports. Then identify the uncertain component. Modify that component rather than surrounding the whole paragraph with vague language.
Match wording to inferential force
The findings indicate [descriptive result] within [scope].
The findings suggest that [interpretation], although [alternative explanation or limitation] cannot be excluded.
The results are consistent with [mechanism], but do not distinguish it from [credible alternative].
Indicate is usually stronger than suggest. Consistent with expresses compatibility, not confirmation. Preserve this distinction when paraphrasing or shortening.
Remove both overstatement and needless weakness
Review each modal verb, adverb, quantifier, and scope phrase. Ask what evidence warrants it. Delete perhaps, possibly, and may when they merely cluster around an already tentative claim. Strengthen a sentence when direct evidence clearly supports it. Use Preserve Claim Strength during revision.